(Possible first paragraph)
Her plane begins descending through the clouds and will be landing in Boston in a few moments. The view of the horizon through the aircraft's window is beautiful. What a wonderful late spring day. In a few days, her daughter will be graduating from Harvard Law School. Karen is beaming with pride for her daughter's accomplishments, but her forehead has worry lines. She worries that Kyra's adult life will contain the same pain and anguish that her's did. She has done her best to protect Kyra through her childhood until now. Letting go of Kyra, the child, to become Kyra, the woman, will be harder then she ever thought it would be.
(A quote from later in the book)
She sits on the bench and pulls her sweater around her a little tighter to keep out the cool evening breeze. The moonlight is dancing on the water. The water looks so beautiful; a wonderful bluish black color with moonlight dancing atop so perfectly. Her mind takes her back to the first time she saw moonlight reflect off ocean water.
It was the middle of July and she was 17. She and her parents had just moved to Clearwater, Florida, from Ohio. Her parents were.... (interested?)
Friday, December 28, 2012
Thursday, December 27, 2012
I have an anouncement to make...
This blog...So, Whatcha Think? is going to be changed (for a time) to the Where the Ocean Meets the Sky blog.
The book, So Whatcha Think? is currently on hold until some milestones and speed bumps can be overcome. I hope you are not upset by this. Please understand...it is what it is.
Where the Ocean Meets the Sky was the second manuscript behind So, Whatcha Think? and was to be published after. But it appears it will be published prior to the release of So, Whatcha Think?.
This blog will begin to cronicle the writing of and up to the publishing of, Where the Ocean Meets the Sky.
I sincerely hope you stick around and continue to read this blog and follow along.
Please understand...So, Whatcha Think? will be published, but not until it is ready. Your attention and following of this book is not in vein.
Thank you staying on board this crazy train!
Sincerely and THANK YOU for reading...
Brooke Ryter
The book, So Whatcha Think? is currently on hold until some milestones and speed bumps can be overcome. I hope you are not upset by this. Please understand...it is what it is.
Where the Ocean Meets the Sky was the second manuscript behind So, Whatcha Think? and was to be published after. But it appears it will be published prior to the release of So, Whatcha Think?.
This blog will begin to cronicle the writing of and up to the publishing of, Where the Ocean Meets the Sky.
I sincerely hope you stick around and continue to read this blog and follow along.
Please understand...So, Whatcha Think? will be published, but not until it is ready. Your attention and following of this book is not in vein.
Thank you staying on board this crazy train!
Sincerely and THANK YOU for reading...
Brooke Ryter
Wednesday, November 7, 2012
Update on Mrs. Berris and Aunt Ellie
Aunt Ellie and Mrs. Berris is a story I wrote back in April 2012. It was a flash fiction of 1000 words or less. The story is fiction based on a few actual truths. If you haven't read it before, read it before continuing to read this post.
My son and his family, which includes my 3 year old grandson, moved in with my Mom a few days ago. Last night, my son and I had the following text conversation.
Him - Mom, is this house haunted?
Me - That depends on if you believe. Say hi to Mrs. Berry for me…bwahahaha
Him - We have heard footsteps on the second floor two mornings in a row with solid proof no one is up there. Like today, I heard them right before I left with Grandpa for work. He was in the kitchen like 10 seconds before I walked in and Steve was right behind me. Everyone else was asleep. Then Heidi heard it again and again, so she got up to check, and Grandma and Chris were still asleep.
Me - Her name is Mrs. Berry. She is harmless as long as you don’t anger her by being afraid of her. It is okay to talk to her, she likes it. She loves children. She always made sure you stayed covered up on cold nights when we lived in the house. She probably remembers you. The house was a wedding gift to her from her new husband nearly 100 years ago. They lived, loved, and raised their children in that house. After she died, Mr. Berry couldn’t stand to be in the house without her, so he sold it…to your grandparents. Just say…Hello Mrs. Berry, and know, she is always keeping an eye on your son. You are safest in the house with her there.
Me - She can’t leave the house because she can’t bring herself to leave the memory of her wonderful life there. That is where her children were born and came home to on Christmas. That is where she lived her life with her true love. It is a wonderful story.
Me - We used to live upstairs with her. I appreciated all the trouble and harm she kept you and your brother from getting into. Again, tell her I said hi.
Him - So this is truly real? Because we have heard true footsteps up there one after another all the way across the room above us.
Me - Yes, it is truly real. But zero reason to be afraid. I see her as the best Great Aunt and Nanny I could have had. She is/was a wonderful and caring woman.
Me - If you are hearing her, she is testing you to see if you are afraid. Really, just talk to her and you will hear her less. But, every now and then you will hear something fall in another room that shouldn’t have fallen. When this happens…check the children…she is trying to tell you something is wrong.
Me - Ask your Grandma about her. She knows the whole story. I met Mr. Berry not long before he died. He came to the house one last time to tell his love goodbye. She won’t hurt you, she will keep you safe. Treasure her presence like I did when I lived there.
Me - By the way, your bedroom, the bathroom, the storage room, the kitchen, the laundry room, and the sunroom are all additions to the original house. Those additions are all single story…there is no room above your bedroom.
Me - Sleep well Son. Goodnight Mrs. Berry.
Him – Goodnight Mom…GOODNIGHT MRS. BERRY!
So…tell me…do you believe?
Friday, July 20, 2012
Chapter 2
(There will be 5 chapters released prior to the books publish date. This is the first of those chapter releases. Each chapter release will have a different cover. After the last release, all covers will be posted along with a poll on my Author Website for the reader's vote. The cover with the most votes will become the cover of the book when published. An Adobe PDF file of this chapter is available for download and saving at my Author Website.)
OUR ANGEL BABY, OUR LOVE
She stood still, her back pressed against the wall as she looked down at the kitchen timer clutched in her hand. The countdown from 5 minutes seemed to be taking an hour. The pregnancy test sat alone in the center of the bathroom counter top.
It had been 4 years since they first began trying to have a baby and her period has never been late. This month, it was late. She waited two full weeks before buying the test. Disappointment had become a monthly experience and she was trying not
Tuesday, July 10, 2012
Beta Readers
Beta Readers - what are they and why do I want (need) them?
What They Are?
According to Wikipedia, a Beta Reader is someone who reads a written work, generally fiction, with what has been described as "acritical eye, with the aim of improving grammar, spelling, characterization, and general style of a story prior to its release to the general public."
The author or writer, who can be referred to as the alpha reader, may use several "betas" prior to publication. The term "beta" is an appropriation from the software industry which uses the terms "alpha" and "beta" for software that are internal works in progress and publicly released tests, respectively (though a "beta" version may still be tested internally). While the use of the concept and the term is most common among fan fiction writers, it is growing in popularity with novelists, to the point where some have thanked their beta readers (sometimes even referring to them as such) in their acknowledgments. A beta reader, who may or may not be known to the author, can serve as proofreader of spelling and grammar errors or as a traditional editor, working on the "flow" of prose. In fiction, the beta might highlight plot holes or problems with continuity, characterisation or believability; in fiction and non-fiction, the beta might also assist the author with fact-checking.
Other types of writing groups have been known to use the French term, critiquer or the abbreviated, informal version, critter in the same context as beta reader.
Why Do I Want (Need) Them?
To me, the Beta Readers are invaluable. Each one of them critique and comment differently. Each gives me different depth and comments on the written work. Each one is bold enough to say things like "this part needs help" or "there is a hole here" or "try this instead of that" or "add more imagery here" or "the flow is good, the characters are fine, but add another paragraph here with more detail" etc., etc. One Beta Reader sent me back one of my chapters with the statement "this chapters SUCKS! Try it again." This is what I need and want from them.
What I don't need is the written work coming back with just one or two small comments along with the statement "the story is great!". I need them to shred and tear it up and to give me their honest and brutal take on the work.
I take all of their comments and address each one. I meld together what works and take out what doesn't, while staying true to my own judgement and the path I want the work to follow.
What I end up with is the story that lived in my mind and I was trying to get onto paper. When reading ones own writing, many things are missed. With the Beta Readers, I miss less and my writing is better because of their comments.
I can't say enough wonderful things about my Beta Readers.
All I can do is hope they know how much I appreciate their help, efforts, and honesty.
You guys are the BEST!!
Thank you!
Brooke
What They Are?
According to Wikipedia, a Beta Reader is someone who reads a written work, generally fiction, with what has been described as "acritical eye, with the aim of improving grammar, spelling, characterization, and general style of a story prior to its release to the general public."
The author or writer, who can be referred to as the alpha reader, may use several "betas" prior to publication. The term "beta" is an appropriation from the software industry which uses the terms "alpha" and "beta" for software that are internal works in progress and publicly released tests, respectively (though a "beta" version may still be tested internally). While the use of the concept and the term is most common among fan fiction writers, it is growing in popularity with novelists, to the point where some have thanked their beta readers (sometimes even referring to them as such) in their acknowledgments. A beta reader, who may or may not be known to the author, can serve as proofreader of spelling and grammar errors or as a traditional editor, working on the "flow" of prose. In fiction, the beta might highlight plot holes or problems with continuity, characterisation or believability; in fiction and non-fiction, the beta might also assist the author with fact-checking.
Other types of writing groups have been known to use the French term, critiquer or the abbreviated, informal version, critter in the same context as beta reader.
Why Do I Want (Need) Them?
To me, the Beta Readers are invaluable. Each one of them critique and comment differently. Each gives me different depth and comments on the written work. Each one is bold enough to say things like "this part needs help" or "there is a hole here" or "try this instead of that" or "add more imagery here" or "the flow is good, the characters are fine, but add another paragraph here with more detail" etc., etc. One Beta Reader sent me back one of my chapters with the statement "this chapters SUCKS! Try it again." This is what I need and want from them.
What I don't need is the written work coming back with just one or two small comments along with the statement "the story is great!". I need them to shred and tear it up and to give me their honest and brutal take on the work.
I take all of their comments and address each one. I meld together what works and take out what doesn't, while staying true to my own judgement and the path I want the work to follow.
What I end up with is the story that lived in my mind and I was trying to get onto paper. When reading ones own writing, many things are missed. With the Beta Readers, I miss less and my writing is better because of their comments.
I can't say enough wonderful things about my Beta Readers.
All I can do is hope they know how much I appreciate their help, efforts, and honesty.
You guys are the BEST!!
Thank you!
Brooke
Thursday, July 5, 2012
Chapter 1
Chapter 1 Cover
(There will be 5 chapters released prior to the books publish date. This is the first of those chapter releases. Each chapter release will have a different cover. After the last release, all covers will be posted along with a poll on my Author Website for the reader's vote. The cover with the most votes will become the cover of the book when published. An Adobe PDF file of this chapter is available for download and saving at my Author Website.)
It Won’t Be
You I Hurt
She packs up quickly so she can get
out the front door of her office building right at 5:00 o’clock. She has to get
home before he does. Every day is a challenge to get home first. Traffic seems
to be getting heavier and the stoplights longer.
She walks briskly to her car, throws
her briefcase and purse across the front
I Received Constructive Criticism...
...regarding the FREE First Chapter Download. I pondered and the commenter makes a point.
The first Chapter Download was released as a PDF file on June 15th on my Author Website. When the reader clicks on the Download button, the file opens in their
Tuesday, July 3, 2012
I Want This Room!!
Some day when I am fich and ramous (because I will never be rich and famous) I am going to have one of these rooms built in my house!!!
Doesn't this look like a lovely place to spend the afternoon...every afternoon.
Shhh...don't interrupt my daydreaming. =)
Have a great 4th of July!!
Monday, July 2, 2012
How Many of These 100 Books Have YOU Read?
On LibraryThing.com this morning and found this and I found it to be interesting...and...it made me wonder the same thing about you.
How Many of These 100 Books Have YOU Read?
Comment with your answer.
How Many of These 100 Books Have YOU Read?
Comment with your answer.
1 Pride and Prejudice - Jane Austen
2 The Lord of the Rings - JRR Tolkien
3 Jane Eyre - Charlotte Bronte
2 The Lord of the Rings - JRR Tolkien
3 Jane Eyre - Charlotte Bronte
Friday, June 29, 2012
My Life Right Now
Friday, June 15, 2012
FREE Chapter Download
The FREE Chapter download is available for your downloading and reading pleasure. Go to Brooke Ryter's Author Website to download the file.
Click on the Click Here to Download Chapter. The file is an Adobe PDF. If you do not
Thursday, June 7, 2012
FREE First Chapter Download (Oh, the fear!)
On June 15th, the first chapter of this book will be available for FREE download. Although I am excited, I am also petrified. This will be the first public release of any part of the book. There is fear of how it will be received, will readers like it, will they hate it, will the chapter do what it is intended to do; create a conversation among the
Thursday, May 31, 2012
Versatile Blogger Award
Recently I was honored (and I truly mean honored) by JenniferChow. She kindly nominated me for the Versatile Blogger Award. (sniff, sniff, tear) Thank you Jennifer very much. Visit her blog and show her some love.
According to the rules, I must
Writer's Corner
Through the research I have done for the publishing of my book, I have gathered TONS of information about self publishing and writing tips and tricks I have found useful in the writerly process.
Keeping this information tucked in my reference binder for only my eyes seems a bit selfish. I don't want to be a selfish clod, so I am posting the information in the Writer's Corner.
I will add
Friday, May 25, 2012
Fifty Shades of Grey…The Critics, The Reviews, The Readers, The Success
People either LOVE this book or they HATE this book. According to Amazon’s star ratings at the time this was typed, the book had 1,963 5-stars and 1,309 1-star and the combined total of 2- through 4-stars was 1,158.
4,430 Reviews
I have read some of the critic reviews
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Wednesday, May 16, 2012
Women and Children Camping
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| Our Circle |
There is the saying; Girlfriends
are sisters we choose for ourselves.
Which is true in my life. There is the saying; Sisters
by Chance, Friends by Choice. Which
is also true in my life.
There comes a point in your life when you realize who really matters, who never did, and who always will. - Unknown
I came to that point of realizing who matters and who doesn’t. I got rid of the riff raff and
There comes a point in your life when you realize who really matters, who never did, and who always will. - Unknown
I came to that point of realizing who matters and who doesn’t. I got rid of the riff raff and
Wednesday, May 9, 2012
MNINB (MY NAME IS NOT BOB)
In April, I took part in the April Platform Challenge hosted
by Robert
Lee Brewer through his MY NAME IS NOT BOB blog. It was amazing how many people took part in
this challenge. We would comment on the
daily task post with our opinion of the task, an update when we completed the
task, and advice to others participating.
It didn’t take long before
Saturday, May 5, 2012
Time Management for Working, Writing, and Platform Development
Writing requires time management and social media (platform building) management and that schedule takes a little while to get right...and even then there is always something that alters the schedule a bit. I sometimes still get a little overwhelmed. I felt extremely overwhelmed when I first added platform building last fall on top of a full time job and writing my book. I had Facebook, RedRoom, Twitter, Google+, and a few other sites I was trying to manage. My commute to work is an hour each way, I am
Friday, May 4, 2012
Novel Outline Tool
Outline…I need to do an outline for the novel. How can I write a novel from the story idea in my head and make sure I answer all the questions, resolve all the situations, assure each character is as strong as they need to be, etc., etc., etc.?
Outlining a novel is a tool, a necessary tool (in my opinion) to writing a full length novel. Each writer needs to find the outlining tool that works for them. What I use may seem too simple or too convoluted for another writer.
I took the concept of this tool from J.K. Rowling. It is the same tool she used for the
Outlining a novel is a tool, a necessary tool (in my opinion) to writing a full length novel. Each writer needs to find the outlining tool that works for them. What I use may seem too simple or too convoluted for another writer.
I took the concept of this tool from J.K. Rowling. It is the same tool she used for the
Thursday, May 3, 2012
Beta Readers Wanted
I wanted to ask all of you a question...
Are any of you interested in being a Beta Reader for some of the stories contained in So, Whatcha Think?
You probably already know this, but our book is a collection of stories that are intended to take the reader on an emotional journey. Each one is tailored to present a life lesson in one way or another. Some are intended to be controversial and some are intended to teach that life lesson by having the
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